I can't reign in my anger
I can't hold back my tears
I don't know what to do anymore
I'm letting lose my deepest fears.
All hell is breaking loose
My heart is breaking from all sides
My mind is muddled as hell
Now I'm the only one left to decide
The right decision for my future
I'm not aware there is a difference between right and wrong
Maybe the meter is broken
I'm drowning in the most miserable songs.
Just point me to the exit
I think its time to get off the ride
I'm feeling sick and dizzy
Just for the record,know I tried.
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Written December 2nd, 2005
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I loved the rhythm of this... it was great!
"Just point me to the exit
I think its time to get off the ride
I'm feeling sick and dizzy
Just for the record,know I tried."
that ending was ka-POW! [?? dunno where that came from...]
great write! -
I am not a fan of the standard rhyme, but I love your message and this was well put together. Great ending.
John
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You should post more of you poems or tell me all your names.
_sam_
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