Im so effing hurt,
by all the lies I hear.
To circulate down to me,
leaving me with only tears.
Im so effing hurt,
that all people can do these days is fight,
no peace left at all,
loathing each other more with every last breath.
Im so effing hurt,
thoughts of loved ones flashes through my brain.
loosing all sanity,
and everone around me.
Im so effing hurt,
at the cheesy break-up lines.
not just sad,
but mad that it had to end.
Im so effing hurt,
that i broke my fiance's heart.
so that i could waste my time,
with someone illegal.
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Written December 2nd, 2005
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sniffle yes...why does life have to be like this?!?!
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alot of pain within this write..I can tell that, sounds like you got tied up in wrong-doing and got "nabed"...hey....we all make mistakes...all of us..the key is ta "learn" from them, as many claim to do but don't.Don't beat ya self up too much.Stop by my spot sometime....an applaude 4 "honesty"
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wow this had a great flow and was written very nicely! keep up the great writing!
***Darksoul -
Thank you dad. I really appreciate this.. I am sorry to say, i will RARELY be on here. 
Tell mom i am sorry, and I hope to talk to you soon. 
Susan -
Very intresting... A very well danced of words. Aye I ken see that pain. I've been through the ring around since breath filled me lungs. I've learned there is no life without payn. But rather letting this festering poison inflict more damage upon the heart ones must learn and in some cases indure such things. I still breath regaurdless upon me own scars. Many I dare say. Perhaps lil one ( I mean that as a compliment lol) instead of letting such complications run yea down. Look on ward to simpler things. You are a young lassie and what yer Mum tells me a lot of hell. ah lol I do appologies I am rattling on again. You to have a splendid eve.
Dad
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WOW, i liked the ending, and all the rest of course
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cheeky posssom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
is this about chris? WTF???? please tell me!
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well thank Jay. anytime you wanna read some poetry look for "Polaroid"
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I like this poem. I appreciate the honest in it.
GOOD WORK and CONTINUE WRITING!!!!
Yours truly---Jay -
thanks.. if you wish to see some more of my poems look for "Polaroid"
meh. 
this is all raw emotions from MOI.
Susan -
wow, i honestly don't know wat to say but, wow sorry if that's true, i like this i mean it shows real emotions.
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