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Is anyone there?

is anyone there?
I can't see you
I'm in this hole
can you help me out?
please someone I can't shout!!
my wrists are all bruised
and cut
by thorns in my life
my head is all bandaged up
with no air to breathe
can y'all see me?

I think I'm the only one who can
or the only one who cares
I'm not a criminal
or a w h o r e
these wounds are so sore
is anyone there?
can you see me?
am I real?

with blood dripping down my face
and no one to help me
why should I live?
why?
no one cares as much!
as long as I'm quite no one can see
see that I'm not really here
or there
I'm no where
and no one

can you see me?
do you even care?

with blood coming down
and all I can do is cry
and sigh
and wonder why.............

why am I here
am I here for a reason or to just be alive?
is this the punishment I get for being myself?


can anyone help me????

~Emily

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Written December 2nd, 2005

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  • So-Alone
    December 3, 2005
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    yea thanxz alot gurl! i love ya!
    ~Emily


  • Cheeky paper
    December 3, 2005
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    Let me know sweety if there is a thing i could help you! its really sad one you made me cry Anything happens in some reasons babe , i love you! dont be too sad ..
    xxx
    paper

  • So-Alone
    December 2, 2005
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    ok! ttyl

  • So-Alone
    December 2, 2005
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    thanxz im glad u didnt think i =t was really bad lol well ttyl
    ~Emily


  • December 2, 2005
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    Take it easy my dear child, life is what we make it! And believe me, life is also full of shits, and sometimes we have to shovel some! And it is survival of the fittest in this dog eat dog world! So hold on, try to live and for the LOVE OF GOD, LIVE!


  • Melodic Screams
    December 2, 2005
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    I like this one...definatly paints a picture in my mind. Your feelings of latly definatly show in this piece and that can be a bad thing, but this definatly wasnt bad.


  • So-Alone
    December 2, 2005
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    i will try to write to u soon i hope! right now im jus sick and tired of everything! lol
    well love and thanxz
    ~Emily


  • December 2, 2005
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    written so well

    Emily,
    Written from the depths of your heart and soul, so vividly that I can hear your cry and pain from millions of miles away. It is hard, I know....It will take more than courage and determination to overcome what is eating you up. An outside intervention is a possible solution that can get into the bottom of the roots of your pain and sorrows. I know this is not just a creation out of fantasy, this is you and I do believe in the feelings that you are trying to share here...
    Talk to me.... write to me...I will try to help... I promise you my dear child..
    Love and hugs,
    mommy ninja


  • mysticshrooms
    December 2, 2005
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    awww.... im sorry to hear you ok? verry passionate.... i hope your ok

    -will

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