the
only
one
you
think
about
is you you you
what
about
me me me???
I
have
needs needs needs
just
like
you you you
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this is something that bothers me alot sometimes...another personal piece....what goes on in my head
Written December 2nd, 2005
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lol! you and me both! but this was all i could milk out of me. i try not to force myself to write what's not..hmm..how do i say it? i don't want to write something that i'm not feeling or hearing in my heart. whatever words are lying there, i write. in the future i might come back and do a rewrite!!! and the poem isn't about MEN
it's about family but i guess you could apply it to anyone. thanks for reading!
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I thought this should have been longer.
It left me with the desire to read more
Well nice poem anyways.I hate it when men are like "It's all about ME deal with it"
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thank you!
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this was done very uniquely. good job. keep it up.
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This is a very interesting poem Tia, something that I've nevered exposed myself to before. But in a way I can relate
Keep on writing 
Love you lots Tia!!!
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holy cats!! i know exactly how this is and think it just about oh idunno....ALL THE FREAKING TIME!! This is so great! keep it up!!
s and 
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~Arachne
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Thankyou. I have just read your poem to and I really liked it, I love to dream and you just re enforce the fact that dreaming is truely magical and inspireing.
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yeah you're right!! a lot of people will be able to relate to this!!!
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I liked this one, think we can all relate to that!! Situation is all too familiar.
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what goes on in your head is perfect since, people mostly just care about themselves and not what others need to know or care about. very good, keep it up.
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