*Falling*
Until
I breathe again,
I hope you know that it
was you who stole my body for
your own.
*Look*
Your eyes
pierced my heart and
left me open to cry
and sigh. I wait for you to come
heal me.
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Written December 2nd, 2005
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This is great i mean.. love can be soo painful and so unfair but when yew love somebody yew just wait for them to make yew ebtter again every time they break you.!
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I love how the feeling of the poem is that you wait for the one that gave you the wound, to mend it. thats how i feel toward a certain someone in my life too. i relate completely
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i think this is your best poem yet.
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wow this is cool, your waiting for the same person who hurt you to come and heal you, funny how some people can do that to us... anyway amazing write...
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