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you decide your own level of involvement

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destination A: Exosphere
destination B: The Core

destination C? exactly where you are, right this second, minute, hour, day.

                 surrounded by banality. aversion. insipidness...

...tepidity.

AAH! look at all the lonely people.
         (insert violin solo here)
                             
                                donde estan los aficionados?

give me the kamikazes.
                                     (homicidal martyrs!!)
perhaps even the Nazis.
                                     (deranged pyschopathic pseudo-Protestants!!)
at least they were dedicated to something.
                    ok, maybe i’d rather not have them.
       
           because they’ve reached The Core.
and are currently contently pushing up daisies.
(OH NO! WAIT!!)
but so are you.

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Written December 2nd, 2005

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  • Meribellez
    December 2, 2005
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    Wow.. just amazing!

  • anne
    December 2, 2005
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    rollercoaster-esque. brilliant finale.