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This Moment

In the moonlight, from up above
I see your face, shining with love
You turn and look, into my eyes
You touch my face, I begin to smile

Standing together, we begin to kneel
Gently we fall, I make no appeal
You hold me closely, we make no sound
Quiet as the night, you lie me down

Your silhouette, above me now
I look in your eyes, true love is found
I feel your body, warm against mine
Your lips press slowly, they feel so fine

You begin to whisper, so soft and low
Your words send shivers, through my soul
We kiss, we smile, it brings happy tears
Three little words, I'm longing to hear

You say; 'I love you', I say it too
Forever I've longed, to hear these from you
I know in my mind, too good to be true
But my heart opens wide and love rushes through

This moment I'll keep, forever in mind
Knowing your love, will always be mine
I kiss you back and smile once more
Knowing I'll love,like never before

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With Love To My Cowboy! Even though we are apart, my thoughts and heart belong to you! Forever yours..xxoo
Written December 1st, 2005

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  • That's one lucky cowbow, dang gum it! That's what hearts are for.


  • jasminerose gold member
    December 4, 2005
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    Hi CountryCousin, Thank you for your lovely compliment! Yes, my Cowboy does know and most definitely returns the sentiment!! I am so very lucky to have him in my life! Thank you for the applause, I'm honored that you thought that highly of this poem! It means a great deal to me. Happy Holidays! Jasmine

  • CountryCousin
    December 4, 2005
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    A beautiful write.

    This is a very beautiful and romantic poem. I trust your cowboy knows how much he is loved and returns the sentiments expressed here.

  • jasminerose gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    Goodmorning Ken, Thank you for your beautiful compliments on my poem. This one holds dear to my heart as does whom it was written for!!!!!I love the bubble drifting metaphor.. and thank you for the applause!!!!! You are welcome, I love to move my readers, as eveident in your comments, I have suceeded!! Have a beautiful Day too!! Jasmine
  • InBetweenThoughts
    December 2, 2005
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    Good Morning Jasmine, I think this is one of the most beautiful love poems I have ever read. It tells a very romantic story of two people very much in love, never ending love. Your rhyme scheme was perfect and the flow was like that of a bubble drifting in the wind. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful romantic write! Have a beautiful day, Ken.....IBT
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