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The Grim Reality


Shrouded in darkness he travels alone

Down the long road towards emptiness

He floats in oblivion his face is of bone

To where time and age have no influence

Drive away troubling spirits!

Bring life to death!

And return to me my obsession!

He turns to me, his eyes are bright spheres

He bids me to cry,

And I'm powerless

Author notes

An...interesting poem, i think...check it out!
Written December 1st, 2005

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  • Piscean soul
    December 2, 2005
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    I loved it. Strong emotions.
    Keep up the good work