When something is incomplete
It is broken, lacking, or meager
It is needing its other part
Imagine a puzzle
But its final piece is missing
It is imperfect
Imagine a large book
But it has no words
It is devoid of what makes it whole
Imagine a mystery
That has no answer
It is half-done
Imagine a world
Where nothing is alive
It is lacking
Imagine me without you
It is a broken, half-done image
It is simply incomplete
Author notes
Written August 17th, 2004
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Beautifully Done!
Oh darling... i should say Katia you need no one to be complete... you are one whole and a beautiful soul because the Almighty One is always beside you. i loved the reading of this work, it truly tell the readers of your heart and your feelings. The emotions contained in this work is amazing... i was able to read the longing of your spirit. i am glad i came to read your poetry. Thank you for the wonderful gift of your pen.
~Elba
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This is such a beautiful and touching love poem. Have you read any of these poems to your boyfriend? I'm sure you have. o^_^o I love the vivid images and the great comparisons. Your originality helps us look at love in a different perspective with your unique comparisons.
~Grace
Edited on Dec 01, 5:11 p.m. because ''.
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