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Lost the Touch


Once it was skin against skin
The most amazing feeling you could ever give
I didnt want to be anywhere else
Cause baby I had finally fallen

And then you lost your touch

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Written December 1st, 2005

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  • dyingsoul89
    December 5, 2005
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    I'm really sorry. Love is always such a hard thing to deal with especially when it's your very first love. Your world just somewhat revolves around what you and him have together, and then when it all comes crashing down so does a part of your world. I'm really sorry that things ended though. I've had a few people that I loved and I just recently lost a very close friend from some stupid fight that I blew way out of proportion. It sucks because he meant a lot to me and I really messed it up. Blah... sorry. I'm babbling. Lol.

    So anyways... amazing piece though. I really liked it. You really captured the feelings of having someone that you care for so much and what it holds but then having to lose that person to someone else. Amazing job. I can't wait to read more from you.

    Christie

    I'm here if you need to talk or anything. I know that may sound awkward but yeah... whatever. I'm here.