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Kindred Spirits

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Like kindred spirits
Separate,
So different
Yet together,
The same
Binding and bonding
Melding as one
Becoming a whole
Sharing a kiss
At break of day
Once again
At fall of night
Upon spiritual plains
They unite
Entwining within
One another arms
As the colors
Of sky transcend
From day to night
And night to day
Hand in hand
Side by side
They go together
In the most perfect way

 

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Written December 1st, 2005

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  • mypassion
    August 27, 2006
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    Simply breath-taken by this well penned entry. You did a fabulous job. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering. Brenda

  • transcendental baby gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    Yes, the opposites that work in unison This is so smoothly written and utterly beautiful in its simplicity Just what we all dream of finding

  • WillowRain
    December 1, 2005
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    Beautiful choice of words throughout the poem.

  • yunimori
    December 1, 2005
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    Perfect...

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    excellent~

    I also like the two spirits binding bonding..seperate yet the same
    You have taken on many layers of this picture
    I love it and best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • B Chandler
    December 1, 2005
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    what youve accomplished here for your write was that you took the layers of the picture and melded them together and then slowly pulled them apart showing what each layer has to provide...nice

    Rae

  • smoking gun
    December 1, 2005
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    like this very much lov,good job putting down on paper with pen--kirby

  • angelofthecentury
    December 1, 2005
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    beautiful perfectly described of what the picture could represent i love it keep up the good work i just recently wrote for the first time aj poem that had a ryhme scheme and was based off a picture if you want to check it out i could use some more input its under my love list its called love at last good job -cassie-
  • passionsdaughter
    December 1, 2005
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    Two spirits , binding, bonding...separate yet the same...I so love that whole concept. It is beautiful as well as spiritual...good food for ones soul!

    hugs,
    Nicole

  • Rowan gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    Sometimes are first impressions are the ones we should all listen to, I love the way you've used the elements in this picture, it supports your poem, instead of vice versa.
    Well done!

  • Celticmoon gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    Thank you much hun. Was just simply something I got when I saw the pic.


  • wbiro gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    yes, there are many different spirits here, and yet entwine their spirits do! Lovely piece here, Bel...

  • vanteya37
    December 1, 2005
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    nice one
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