Circle of Power surrounds me
Shadows beckon away the day
I ask here and receive
Answers showing the way
I send offerings and prayer
Travel far and still stay here
Ask for guidance on my path
Battling the confusion of chaos
I am taught lessons here
Chained by gravity, my soul flies free
Guides lead me through the maze
Assisting me through the sickly haze
Circle of Power surrounds me
Showing the path of truth
I ask here and receive
The greatest gift…understanding me
Author notes
Written December 1st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- The Elements by xFeatherLettersx.
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This work will empower each reader, detailed and strong write. great job!
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Nice work sis!
You speak of what we both know so very well. The cirlce of power is place to learn and grow and let the spirit soar. The perfect palce to truly get to know yourself. I often find myself there.......daily as a matter of fact.
Bravo!
Blessings
celticmoon -
great
An interesting piece here...well thoughtout...it speaks on many levels...simple words meaning many things...very profound...well worth the read..i am in wonder of why you did not enter this one in wolfbanes contest...keep up the great work
dark search -
grannyeri,
The circle of power is the circle in which Wiccan covens and solitary practioners work in. We cast spells, do energy work and healings with in this circle. This circle is the same to us a church,mosque or synagogue is to other faiths. -
A nice touch with a spirituality to it. Everyone needs a place of refuge and worship where they can look inside themselves and
reflect. The answers to life's many unanswered question lies within. Haunting and enchanting!
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nicly done and very well written. good work.
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This is such a true and beautiful piece of work. I think you did a marvelous job. keep up the great work and thank you for sharing it. You have a bless one and may God bless you as well. take care....
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I love the sentiment of this write and your word choices are good. I would suggest you find one rhyme scheme and stay with it. I saw 3 different ones. Please don't think I'm being hateful or such, just a suggestion.
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I wonder what Circle of Power is - is it the crystal ball in this photo? Flowed very nice and had a good rhythm and rhyme. Good final sentence.
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Needs weight
I like your spiritual theme in this poem but believe it lacks the weight to pull it into viability. -
Good idea for a poem.
I like your spiritual theme. -
There's a beauty in this piece that speaks to ones spirit, where our sense of comfort lies. I especially liked your closing:
"Circle of Power surrounds me
Showing the path of truth
I ask here and receive
The greatest gift…understanding me"
I so agree the greatest gift we can obtain is truth and the understanding of self. Awesome and thought provoking piece!
hugs,
Nicole
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That picture is really beautiful and your poem goes along with it great! Thanks for sharing!
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Well written and to acknowledge its power as knowing truth is a spiritual awareness that can enhance one's life.
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Wow...i like it it's spititualnees and deep feeling. Wonderful
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kooolllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzz great flow very well writen i like it alot and i love the picture too
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Very spiritual and great flow.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for sharing...Keara -
interesting i like it
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