Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Beyond the Crimson door...

 

*Beyond The Crimson Door...*

Author notes


Written December 1st, 2005

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Symphony
    December 8, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Lovely lovely description here, you brought her to life completely, she could be any one of us, and desribed her so minutely - espeically liked the one 'playing with the pearls' quote - very eloquently done!

    Nice job, like Kunj, I'd love for the story to continue Best of luck in the contest with this one.

  • AngelicMistress gold member
    December 5, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    thank you for helping me with my errors, I do use my spell check, because I am dislexic... so I try to be as careful as possible, so I am truly grateful indeed... your friend, Angel

  • fathom me
    December 5, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Hi
    Enjoyed this tale like poem.. I wish you'd continue, and tell us what happens when she crossed that crimson door..
    by the way, do you mean "dead" here in the last stanza-
    'has withered like the dad's,'
    Best of luck in the contest.Love Kunj.

  • StoneLion
    December 1, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Que magnifico, mami! Yo puedo ver todos de las cosas en mi cabeza facilmente. Especial me gustan los frases "There's no Romeo to love her. No one to save her from herself." y "like branches of diseased, rotted trees." Que fuerte! Y el fin, me gusta el fin tambien por que hay esperanza por la pobrecita. De qual quier manera, FANTASTICA mami! Buena suerte en la competenica.