Every day I will walk thru these Halls of hell
eyes to the floor
books in my arms
and not once will I be noticed
I DO NOT strive for attention
just the reassurance that even If im dead on the inside
Im still alive on the outside
But it seems to me that that is not true
Too many times do i think to myself...that if i wasnt there the next day
would they notice?
Or maybe if i made myself truly invisible...like the way i feel
then maybe they would forget about me
and go on with their day
worrying about boys
or sports
or how they look
Maybe they could see the potential friend right under their nose
ready to catch them when they fall
hurt and crying
I wish they could just grow up and see that life is more than clothes...
what music you listen to
I want them to see that they arent the person that has it the worst
(im not saying i do)
that they would stop being selfish
and ignorant
Author notes
Just thoughts
Written December 1st, 2005
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safsreth
good
emotion=lots
artistic ability=high
so over all i liked it
good job
got er done from me
kay thanks good job
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thanks alot...im glad u liked it..
xxox
kayla -
really nice poem i really liked it and keep writeing bc i like to read what you write when i have the time. i like how you put your words down and the way you feel it was filled with alot of emotiion and pain it seemed so very well done nicely written.
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Tee hee!... o0hhhh.. a fairy!
Keep writing babes! At least I still care!!! -
The truth!!!!
Thy lips speak the truth! Snotty peeps don't see how nice a person is on the inside... just on the outside, the appearance is what matters. Therefore, I say this to them,
*Chupa Coulo!!!* & *Muera de me* -
Your thoughts are true Kayla, sometimes people can't just look past a person's looks and into their hearts instead. Nice write
It's been awhile since I've read poems and it's nice reading again. In a way, I really miss it Also, it's been awhile hasn't it Kay? I rarely see you now 
Anywho, keep writing ^-^
♥ for you~
~Ibar~ -
I agree. Great piece full of emotion. I really liked it! I like how you can communicate your feelings clearly, some people can't do that. Great job!
-Kay
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