Baby all I want is you and I know you want me too
All this stuff we are going through there's so much between me & you that I want to undo there are so many times I want to go back to
I cant wait until I'm older but that's just another folder but I cant until the next time are love can be but Ill have to wait and see until I find out the REAL ME
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Written December 1st, 2005
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It was very heart felt. That is always a good thing. It makes me wonder about the whole thing about getting older. I wonder whats going on. It's none of my business, I'm just saying it makes you wonder and imagine.
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great job, i really like this one.
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3 Stars ***
oo desarae, this is such a lovely write.. short but sweet.. and i like it soo much
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up ... your humble little friend....
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.... - vic ( who else? )
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love is so hard to deal with sometimes! Great work! Dont stop writing!
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Hey, I really like this one. I can relate to it a lot. Very powerful and emotional write, and the rhyming really adds to the awesome story. And I like the ending. It really sums everything up. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!
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