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So What to Do... What to Do...

 



She had loved him
now he’s gone.


 

Trying times follow along.


 

Springs and autumns come and go
sometimes she’s lost in sun and snow.


 

This is life
for most of us.


Make that all of us
who linger here
who’ve lost a companion
close and dear.


 

So what to do... what to do...
sit in sorrow blubbering?
That’s OK
it has it’s times
for memories are sweet, sublime.
Me? I’ll blubber with you here
since I'm lingering, too, with a salty tear.
Hey! We shared a tear here, see?
Well, I’ll be...


You see,
you still have us on this earthith
for slinging sappy happy mirth with
‘Tis the season to be happy
to share a smile and some mirthith.


 

but I feel guilty being happy
but that’s how I feel when you’re yappy
that is, yappy when your happy
and you are happy when you're yappy
(and believe me you are always yappy
and by extension always happy)
glad to see you spreading cheer
it dissipates my feelings crappy...
(my best stanza EVER, I believe...!)


‘Tis the season, my fellow dear
for slinging sappy happy mirth with
with others lingering on this earthith...
yapping in their open ears
while remembering loved ones we held dear.


and, in the moments, silent, sad,
think of friends, and have a glad.


 

(Merry Christmas, Wanda...)
a glad for you


 


 

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Written December 1st, 2005

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  • poetryality silver member
    December 9, 2005
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    I must say this is the happiest, sappiest, poem I have read in quite a while. Kudos for you for I know Wanda had to get a chuckle out of this my dear honorable son. Your humor is abounding. The best to you in this challenge.

    Creative and original!

    Much Love,
    Renee


  • ShaShay
    December 2, 2005
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    WOW! You never cease to amaze me! You get such an emotional response from all readers. I love the stanza diversity. I just like all of it!


  • whispersoftly
    December 2, 2005
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    this is wonderful and yes i agree one of the best stanza's you have ever written this is beautiful and touching Wayne well done and good luck my freind xx Cheryl


  • wbiro gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    thank you, purply daughter...!

  • wbiro gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    Thanks once again, Oh Grand Aunt!


  • suseann
    December 2, 2005
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    Tout Sweet a compassion write me lill nefew! This was for Wander hey? Twas purdy as all get out too!~~~~~Suseann


  • lavender shadows
    December 1, 2005
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    Oh yes, I must agree that that is definetly your best stanza ever. I've never seen so many yappy crappy happy rhymes in a stanza before! Then again, the "ith" stanza is quite incredible as well. Because they're all real words in the Waynictionary. (OK, can you tell that I'm really silly today?) Here, I'll say something productive, watch (anticipation creeps)... I really like your unevenness in this piece within the stanzas, as well as the larger-than-usual spaces between them, it worked well in my head. OK, that's my one serious comment, because this piece really made me laugh (which really isn't hard today). But it is sweet.

    your crazy lavender

  • wbiro gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    an applause, Angela, for suffering through this one! lol


  • imonlyme7
    December 1, 2005
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    Another gold it is! Wonderful poem, good luck to you..not that you need it..your always good..no the best!


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    'She had loved him now he’s gone. Trying times follow along. Springs and autumns come and go sometimes she’s lost in sun and snow...' '...and, in those moments, silent, sad, think of friends, and have a glad.' Wayne, none of our loved ones would want us to be unhappy or feel guilty; they would only want us to smile & be at Peace, my Friend...You know this, as well as I do... Thank you for another lovely poem, Poet... Wanda

  • wbiro gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    Thanks, Anna, a golden sentiment here, maybe!


  • Anna Emkah
    December 1, 2005
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    GOOD LUCK in the Contest. I am sure this one will be GOLD for you. Anna


  • SexyAngel0418
    December 1, 2005
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    WOW... This is awesome AP dad!!! You did a great job on this!!! Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest!!!

    Hugs,
    Your brightest angel!!!

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