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Escaping his wrath

She closes her wings around her once more,
Not letting anyone or anything in.
Her broken heart cannot take another love massacre.

She cannot escape the wrath of his presence.
His image plays over and over within her mind,
becomming more faint, the memories as slowly erasing.

The devil laughs as the angels cry,
Watching her die slowly, the corruption he has caused,
No one can seem to mend.

In her dreams, she waits for his kiss to bring her back home.
The fears that once were gone, now come alive, and consume her.
On the inside she crumbles at the sight of him,
But forces a smile and a friendly hug on the outside.

He is her slow suicide.
What did she do to deserve to suffer like this?
She is tired of fighting to breathe,
She has no strength to keep on living.

She still cries herself to sleep at night,
Wondering where he went.
She truly loved him,
But she realizes now that love leads you to hurt,
And then you are right back where you are started.

So she closes her wings around her once more,
Not letting anyone or anything else in.
Just awaiting for the day when all of the pain is gone,
When she doesnt have to breathe,
When she doesnt have to see,
When she doesnt have to feel his painful presence anymore.

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I dont know.
Dont ask.
Written December 1st, 2005

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  • Kya Jaganshi
    January 11, 2006
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    amazingly morbid...

    Wow... This is much better than anything I shall ever write... I thank you for the comment you made on 'Death in Darkness'... I believe I shall be reading much more of your work...

    Til then...
    Kya Jaganshi

    May the wind blow through the trees, sweeping the fears of living away...Along with the fears of death... For no fear is rewarding, or hated... Only...there...

  • Zyi
    December 5, 2005
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    Nothing is wrong, it just kinda came to me, this poem talks about past relationships, but means absolutly nothing. I love you and you know that you can call me too. I miss you.


    Muchlove
    Donna

  • Somebodys Hero
    December 3, 2005
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    ummmm

    Donna this has so much emotion wrapped up in it, I loved the words but I dont like the pain I feel from you when I read it!!! I hope nothin is wrong, well if you want to talk sumtime my name is Simplepunkchic@yahoo or call. I love you Babe
    Sissy
    Edited on Dec 03, 10:48 p.m. because 're4ad'.

  • Zyi
    December 2, 2005
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    Ok, Just tell me whenever you see me, or send me an instant message if you can, I want to chill together sometime, but I dont know when so yeah....I WANT TO BE UNGROUNDED.

  • madmaid692000
    December 2, 2005
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    i likes it it was good but i'm kind of confused about the person but i'll talk to you about that later
    love sarah


  • Realistic Nightmare
    December 1, 2005
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    aww..donna..i really like no i love this piece..its awesome..just like you..well i love you and i will ttyl..ok?
    XxX
    (your toxic bitch)

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