In the middle of DIFFI- lies opportunity -CULTY.
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Yeah, it's a bit weird but so am I.
Hope you get it.
FOR THE CONTEST:
"My Heart goes to the Darkness"
I'm sorry but it's not really a prewrite. I entered it as a fresh write for the contest but somehow, it got removed. Maybe my hand's fault.
Written December 1st, 2005
A contest entry
- One-Liners by Wolf-dog.
300 points, ended December 10, 2005, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks a lot for the comment...even I wasn't sure if it's technically a one-liner or not. Well, I'll just try changing it a little. I hope you won't mind taking a second look at it.
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It made me laugh at something (which is weird cause I don't think this was really made for comedy.) but perhaps because I relate to this well. This one is screaming trophy at me but I'm not sure because technically it is not a one-liner. So I'm not sure...but thanks for putting the quote in.
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Haha...it did? Well, I must thank my Physics teacher. Had he not been so exceedingly boring, I'd have never written this.
By the way, the thing that you know bout Physics, it's called Newton's Third Law Of Motion. What a mouthful! I personally think that there are little chances that Newton had any girlfriend...that dude was so busy making formulae and stating theories to torture students like me. I'm sure he couldn't have had enough time for a girlfriend. 
Well, Vic and I could win the Nobel for "wasting time", if there's a Nobel like that.
That day was particularly boring for me...didn't have anything better to do than team up with Vic and waste time.
Edited on Dec 09, 1:30 p.m. because 'I'm a loser in the spelling bee contest'.
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Navdeep, For a tiny little microbe it spoke loud and clear.
Physics,
never had it and about the only thing I know is that there is an equal and opposite reaction for every action.
You must know how to use your time constructively the way you and Vic went on back there in the comment area. LOL
I had no clue and still read it all. Your mind must have been on physics and that's why you forgot to tell me about this one. Keep the ink flowing in that pen, don't want it to dry up. 
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I didn't tell you? Oh...maybe I forgot.(Thank you, thank you. Takes a bow) It wasn't a muse actually. Just a tiny little microbe of muse and I got this idea when my physics teacher was droning on and on about something called the lens maker's formula. Rolls eyes See, I know how to use my time constructively.
Thanks for the comment.
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Whoooo hooooo!!!!!
Navdeep, You didn't tell me you had written something new!
Last we talked you still had that thing called writers block.
I see the muse came out to play in the form of a one liner.
You did a great job with this. So true it is. I'm glad I just decided to stop by on a whim. Don't be keeping me in the dark when you write something new. I may have to hunt you down after my cup of Christmas cheer. LOL Excellent job here and I wish you the best in the contest. Happy writing, hope this got rid of the block. Standing ovation of course to go along with my applause. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always. Joyce
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Haha...I wrote this when I was dead bored... Thanks for the comment.
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excellent!
woooooooooooooooow!!!this is absolutely wonderful...great job...i really love the way you structure the whole thing!!!!great stuff!!keep it up!!! -
Thanks for the comment. Yeah...too much Hindi because Vic and I were just wasting time.
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Nice message..too much Hindi on your page...lol..Good luck in the contest..I liked the way you had arranged the one liner though!
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Bahut chalu dimag hai na?
Edited on Dec 01, 12:13 because 'I wanted 5 evil eyes'.
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mere paas dimag nakko hai woh to tumhare paas hai.. abhi abhi uska nazrana bhi le liya ... hansa - vic
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Abey ab isme aur kya karoon? I wrote this darn thing but now, I'm just lost about the form... Agar itna dimag hai, toh help kar na.
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liar.. you didnt change it ..jhutti - center ka left kiya..aur kucch change nahi kiya - vic
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Rahe na PraFOOL ke PraFOOL. Abey abhi contest holder ko IM kiya hai. When she replies, I'll change it...till then, keep on visiting this poem's page. HAHA!
Edited on Dec 01, 11:14 because 'I don't know how to spellllll
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still same
.. be maharani.. anyways.. i will be back laters ... - vic
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Thanks for the critique, PraFOOl. Yeah, I know the presentation is screwed but I just didn't know how to put this entire thing here. Moreover, the contest holder wants a centre alignment.
Anyway, thanks again.
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5 Stars *****
oye hansa.. this is jabardast mast chakachak tanatan ekdum intelligent oneliner.. well but let me be honest.. i think the presentation, should have been better!!!! ( gusse mat hona, but i love your thought its wonderstanding but the way you have conveyed it, it comes out lil auckward )
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up... your humble little friend... ... ... ... - vic ( who else? )
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Thanks a lot for the comment and the applause.
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Wow that's really cool! And it's so true. Very creative I like it that's really awesome!
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LOL! Thanks a ton for the applause and the comment. By the way, I chose this title to ignite imaginations like yours.
And I thought of this style just a moment ago. Oh hey, is that darn yahoo working? Mine doesn't let me sign in. 
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kya tittle hai yaaar .i thought something else ... ..well this is so very true..infact this could be excellent if created in graphics
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