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Gift wrapped heart.

You don't want me around, i see it in your eyes
(but thats not what i felt in your touch)
     I'll gift wrap my heart,
        and send it to your door.
   
    With the right light,
     And the right drapes.
      This could really work.
 
            Entering the same gates, every single day,
 Hopeing to catch a glimpse of you,
        The moment never comes,
 And this feeling will never fade..
       
               With the right light,
                 And the right drapes.
                   This could really work.
 
   Take me back to that night,
     when everything was perfect,
        In my drunken state, i slurred the words [I.love.you]
 you looked away, and what you didn't know...
           Is that i really meant it.

        With the right light,
                 And the right drapes.
                   This could really work.

  Please tell me this will work.. </3  

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mmm i am hungry.
Written December 1st, 2005

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  • StateOfEmergency
    December 16, 2005
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    no i'm not,are you? lol

  • December 15, 2005
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    hey.. i got my hair cut again? lol just thought you'd like to know?? um are you a lesbian? write back

  • December 12, 2005
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    Awww gorgeous!! I say if you guys give it time you can make everything work.. just like she said you need sometime t oget to know each other properly.. Hun you're so sweet.. She couldnt NOT love you <3 xxoxoxoxxo

  • -throw it up
    December 11, 2005
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    Wow.(hey yay you <3 c too!!)This poem is gor/ge/ous.brilliant. I <3 it times 4

    <33 Ally
  • StateOfEmergency
    December 11, 2005
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    umm umm umm Lily..

  • December 10, 2005
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    hey gorgous!!!!! who is it about??

  • Anothercheapheart
    December 1, 2005
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    awesome

    wow. probably my favorite poem of yours so far. i can really relate to this, and the wording makes it slightly sarcastic and at the same time, you know you mean it. absolutely brilliant.

  • Jacinta Lee
    December 1, 2005
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    me too. yes this is beautiful mwah love u
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