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Erotic Intentions

Lustful...

entwined rapture;

fondled dreams -wet cadence

silken, sweat-drenched ease between gasps

blissed sighs

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Written December 1st, 2005

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  • B Chandler
    December 1, 2005
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    Thoreau,
    this is a dream being dreamt....
    it could be a dream from a woman's pov or a male's pov

  • cgirl0410
    December 1, 2005
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    I really liked this. I liked the expressions and the wording of this piece. I really liked the imagery and the way it is so loose that the reader can really come out with whatever they want to. Great write. Thanks you so much for commenting on my poem "Grandma's Hands." I think maybe you got it the most. Later. - cgirl0410

  • wtchr
    December 1, 2005
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    wtchrpr...4.5

    Ayizan;
    Erotic Intentions is able to evoke the whole gambit of an encounter with a minimum of words. I takes truely powerful writing to capture this much detail in such a short piece. Clear imagery provides the reader with all the vivid vision and scope detailed in this passionate work.