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tiny capuccin

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tiny capuccin
in the jungle canopy
snake slithering by

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these tiny monkeys face the terrors of the jungle on a daily basis
Written December 1st, 2005

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  • Celticpoet gold member
    December 3, 2005
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    Oh sorry to hear that shancy!...thanks for your comments...as always uplifting and very encouraging....hoping i find you in good spirits apart from your headache!...regards!...Dan

  • Shancy Fayre
    December 3, 2005
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    Hi Lomhar! I'm about to go to bed with a bad headache but I wanted to check AP. I love monkeys. I have good memories of
    seeing them at various times. I feel bad for the ones who must fight the jungle. I love this Haiku, as I do your others. Shancy.

  • Sai Babas Lotus
    December 2, 2005
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    Ahhhh some simply wonderful imagery here. I agree with myron's comments and Richard's too.

    Charishma

  • myron silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    i liked this haiku...well crafted, with its caesura and juxtaposition of images.

    liked richard's astute comments as well.