I'm sorry. I don't have pretty words -
I don't have pretty words to waste on you or on this situation.
The way you smell like cheap wine & stale cigarettes all the time--
Someday, you'll end up with a cheap whore, in a cheap motel.
With cheap alcohol, cigarettes & cocaine.
This is a wish.
Make it come true.
I will be the cheap whore. I will be the cocaine.
I will be whatever you want.
Author notes
oh well
i just want to be with him but he doesnt love me.
Written November 30th, 2005
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I love the comment below, "I really like this one" by someone called "Exploit Stereotypes" perfect. There is an edge and an innate sadness to this piece that is right on the money. Good work
ps love the title
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I really liked this one. I like cigarettes...ha but yeah i think it's cool that you write in french too...too bad I can only read little parts of that but it's still sweet
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So I dunno if you remember me or not, you left a comment on a couple of my poems a long time ago, I have only now had the chance to check them though...Your comments were amazing!! Soo thank you Soo much
I feel so much sadness in this piece!! So much pain!! I really hope you're not so sad....If you ever need to talk...let me know. Great write by the way. I could really feel the emotion in it!
Love,
Lee
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