In some far away time
Where I dwelled in the light
You came upon me
Interfered with my flight
With memories asleep
You awakened my dreaming
You came forth and lingered
Ready for a lasting teaming
Our lives touched
No beginning, no end
Many worlds before this
And now, forever blend
Should our hands not touch again
No matter, our souls are one
I am with you, you are with me
'til our wandering is done
The bond seems forever stronger
Together is eternity
We face so many worlds again
Past, present, future - one - two - three.
Author notes
Where in Germany is you boyfriend? I was stationed there for three years myself.
Written November 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- Make me feel happy by Saramouch.
300 points, ended December 4, 2005, 7 entries
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amazing
wow, i loved it, made me wonder if anyone has ever felt that way about me and if he has where is he now, and why did he leave...haha, there are just some things every girl wishes they had, and they should know. if you still know her, send her this poem or give it to her, doesnt matter now, unles your on bad terms, because it would make her feel so special to know how you felt. -
hmm Germans have great beer
this reminds perhaps of a certain girl you were seeing when you and alan were stationed out there. Though I could be wrong. nice work t
Edited on Jan 04, 10:51 p.m. because 'was thinking about german beer'. -
Sorry I just got to your poem. I love it though. He is in Hidelburg. Great poem, good luck.
Sara
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