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Memoirs of a Broken Heart

And now the sound is hushed
As black tears begin to roll
Down porcelain flesh
I never cared much about you
I just wanted you to know
Don't leave me now
When all the world has drowned
Don't leave me now
When all I can do is frown
These hearts are all broken
But they are still beating
For love will save us all
Your fairytale cupcakes and fake smiles
All hastened my fall
So don't tell me it's alright
Don't tell me its fine tonight
Cause choices are made
And I am betrayed
You let me fall apart
I'm sinking to the end.

Author notes

So I havn't added anything in a LONG while...I hope someone will read this SH!T and be happy with it...*sob*
Written November 25th, 2005

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  • natster
    November 30, 2005
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    wow, this is really good! I really like the beginning, the imagery is awesome.


    -nat