wake me up from this nightmare
ots so real it makes me hurt
break my heart in half
so that there is nothing left
everytime i fall in love now
there will be not be a heart break
give me this gun
so i can kill the person
that you love
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Written November 30th, 2005
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wow this was really good i love love loved it. every word was great and i love your background. wow you are a great writer i love your work! you are on my faves too. keep it up
forever and always
kaytee -
"ots so real it makes me hurt" 'ots' should be 'it's'
"there will be not be a heart break" the first 'be' isn't necessary
Ouch, this was a true nightmare you had or real life? Either way it's not very nice. I'm sorry you feel/felt like this. It's not cool and it definitely hurts.
Hope you feel better know
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