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do something for me

make me
help me
stop me
do something to take
this urge away...

hold me
kiss me
hug me
try to make me forget everything
bad that has happen

love me
hate me
lust me
whatever you do...
dont forget me

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Written November 30th, 2005

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  • GC for KH
    December 1, 2005
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    wow i really like this one!!!!!thx 4 ur comment!!!u have true talent=)
  • sexybaby
    November 30, 2005
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    ok

    I thought it was ok it dident realy say what you needed to be held from. I have cut and I am thinking that that is what it is about but It was good I thought it needed a little more.
  • A Silent Cry
    November 30, 2005
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    very short but in just those few lines you capture great emotion with very few words...nice job...i loved it... keep it up..