The past has fallen through my window
I am here and there and being guided by love
love of the unknown
My aura is pulling me into realms of secrecy
I have lived this before
I have lived this before
These are whispers
only whispers that have been spoken so loudly they hurt my ears.
It's a mad world
My back has been stabbed
It seems
yes it seems that I may be going mad
before I have forgotten but someone forgot to remind me and now I remember
how important it is to love
Cellar
Door
The two most beautiful words in the English language
And all around me are familiar faces
worn out places
worn out faces
I have been traveling on the wings of time for a long time
and through this time I forgot what it was like
what it was like to be
to be loved
And this face of my imagination keeps coming to me
he keeps coming to me
What does he keep telling me?
I am smug with a satisfaction in knowing what everyone else does not know
I need to burn it to the ground
It needs to be burned to the ground
where is my circle?
I came around in a circle...
Author notes
I Love Donnie Darko!!!!!
best movie EVER!!!!
Hope you like!!
Written November 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- Movie Mania by Marzipan.
300 points, ended December 22, 2005, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awww thank you!! I love this movie too, one of my favorites, thank you so much for your comment!!
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go you.
oh yeah, p.s.
I loved this part.
"I am smug with a satisfaction in knowing what everyone else does not know"
I'm putting it as a quote by you on my page. Wonderful job.
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Great
Yay you! Donnie Darko is my favorite movie. Everyones writing about Donnie Darko, but this is BY FAR the best one. I love it.
I hope you win.Honestly. I like how you used words from the song in the movies. its interesting. I love it.
Plus...
Jake is the hottest man alive.
Wonderful. Bye friend
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This is very good! I loved the movie, have seen it twice and own it. It is very dark and strange throughout. You did a great job getting that point across. Good luck in the contest. Shancy.
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Man... this movie was soooo good... my boyfriend made me watched it and though I got a little freaked out by the rabbit and the old lady (lol... I get scared easily) it was easily one of the best movies I've seen.
This was like a song to me, almost-- the verses would make for good lyrics to set to haunting music. Something suited for the soundtrack.
Wonderful poem and best of luck to you in the contest!!
Elizabeth
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woah dude fricken awesome man hope u win u deserve it great pick of a movie love the poem u rock love ya!!
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fantastic! I loved donnie darko, and this represents it exceptionaly well. I really liked your inclusion of the "cellar door" thing. and these lines "I need to burn it to the ground
It needs to be burned to the ground" were a great interpretation. good luck in the contest.
thank you for commenting on my abortion poem- I know its a tricky subject. I'm really pleased that all the people who disagreed with me have been so polite. I posted a different abortion poem once but was forced to delete it because I got a flood of nasty responses, that I couldn't possibly respond to. I do see the sentiments behind being pro-life, I just feel that it's a decision that the state cannot make for you. -
this is very cool, but I'm not sure about the 'this man keeps coming to me' part, I think thing would be more appropriate, also, scratch the line about big ears, if you made it seem more ghostly, it would fit a lot better.
Thank you so much for entering (= Good luck
~ Sylvia xxx
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