you hate my dreams
you cant hear my screams
that are out loud
you are so proud
that you can hide
the pain inside
you don't care
this pain i cant bare
you said "I love you"
you said you'd be true
you don't care about me
and this pain that you see
has come from you
you said you were here
but i fear
that your gone
you were all i had
i hope you are glad
you've ruined my life
so I take out this knife
and use it
for i cant stand you one bit!
Author notes
hey this is about the same friend from my last poem so if you could check it out that would be great thanks!
~Leia~!
Written November 30th, 2005
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hey leia.. i just realized that i havent read many of your poems so i thought i would start... i hope u still dont feel this way towards bre... anyway it's good and keep it up!!!
love you and if u need me call me... im always here for u even when no one else is...
lylas
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LEIA do you still feel this way?....???????about me I mean?
Tell me soon ok cuz I need to know! -
I think this is good and u don't need to change it
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my dreams you hate
Looks like you and bedtime bear have to talk
, anyways,you should smooth out your poem ,,here's my view on this..
you hate my dreams------------You hate may dreams
you cant hear my screams------Being deaf to my screams
that are out loud ------------Will you ever know my pain
you are so proud--------------Or be too proud and fade away
CHORUS
that you can hide------------- So go run and hide
the pain inside---------------From my pain inside
you don't care----------------Say you don't care
this pain i cant bare---------stop hating my dreams
you said "I love you"---------The love that you promised
you said you'd be true--------Just seems not there
you don't care about me-------It's a game you played
and this pain that you see----Why don't you just see it
CHORUS ....
------------------------------ So go run and hide
the pain inside---------------From my pain inside
you don't care----------------Say you don't care
this pain i cant bare---------stop hating my dreams
has come from you-------------What youre doing to me
you said you were here -------Setting me free
but i fear -------------------My fear is so real
that your gone----------------I know that youve gone
CHORUS---
you were all i had------------You were all I had
i hope you are glad-----------Now all I have is sad
you've ruined my life---------My life seems faded
so I take out this knife------This knife in my heart
and use it
CHORUS
for i cant stand you one bit!--I can't bare what youve done
ANYWAYS I SEE IT AS A SONG ......
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WRONGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
hey this is good but very untrue I do hear your cries and I do see the pain and I aint proud i can hide I just do it anyway!...and I do care about you so dont you ever fuckin say that!... I care for you more than ANYONE even my family!..so dont fuckin say that cuz it aint true well I got to go ok AND I DO LOVE YOU so quit lien to urself for all that I say is true ok? **bre**
p.s.I DO LOVE YOU
STOP LIEN TO YOUR
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great
Another good poem by Leia!! lol Keep up the great work Leia! -
thanks for your comment I appresiate it thanks
~Leia~!
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you're name is leia? my sister's name is leia. never met another one. hi. hehe. as well as your poem. it was a nice peice. i'd read the other one..but i have gotta get off and go see my brother. it seemed the rhyming was a bit forced? it's very sad though. and the knife thing i under stand. anyway. good job. -ariel
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