A tarnished angel leaves her ghost on the surface.
A jealous daughter starves to death, for the mother,
as I awaited your return.
I still wait for your return.
It seems the only way that I will ever feel alive.
To throw myself into my injuries and close my eyes
I'd give anything to feel alive.
And I will wait for you tonight.
Author notes
short poem, i kinda like it, please comment
Written November 30th, 2005
A contest entry
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400 points, ended February 3, 2006, 10 entries
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stupid, doesnt sound like poetry and doesnt m
You know, I read your profile, you act really tuff, but your proably just some prep school kid with a grudge against life. If you need to say that you hate life and that you don't need and exorcist, then you're just digging for attention. Get a life. -
omg this poem is amazing a perfect teenage pain piece your talent astounds me keep it up
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wow
sam~
hey hun wots up? this poem is very very dark and very very powerful. this is an amazing piece. what DID make you write it?? always know that i'm here for you if you ever need someone to talk to.
XxoxX love now and for all time
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This is really good. What made you write it?
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very good
a very very VERY dark poem
kinda reminds me of the novel "The Woman in Black" but gud newayz....
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Wow...
You're really, really good! Lol, I can;t really give oyu any tips because i've only been writing for a little while, but, anyway, I officially love it! It was kinda sad, and made methink how our life might be. -
nice....odd....but definatly awesome
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i LOVE your poems sam! they're awesome! write more more more pleeeeaaaassse!!!
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A good poem. Really good. Keep it up.
~MaryAnn~
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