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Just Call My Name

Whenever you feel alone
or cold like a frozen stone
left to die a solitary death
far from home and love
getting older without someone
feeling behind or forgotten
or maybe even completely rotten
shivering in unknown fear
then I will be there

Just call my name
I will never blame
or judge you insane

Whenever you feel scared
or forced to throw your spear
casting evil spell's
ringing those final bell's
drifting away from all you had
becoming more evil and bad
longing for quietness in your mind
can't see fearing becoming blind
then I will guide you to safe ground

Whenever you feel empty and useless
or something close to madness
screaming without any sound
feeling stoned and bound
locked inside eternal prison
without a key or any escaping tool
and classified as a everlasting fool
that only could steal and skip school
then I will be there to show you the blossom

Whenever you feel without a heart
or your love seem like cutted into parts
feeling like taking water over your head
has no one to comfort you in your empty bed
eating all your meals alone
wishing you could turn the tide
and get back your disappeared and lost pride
without anyone left to ask to borrow
then I will be there to lift away the sorrow

Whenever you feel like someone else
or getting confused by the spoken word
feeling the closeness of the flaming sword
being chased by forces and spirits
without no mercy or will to understand
that you have done nothing and deny to stand
like a beggar waiting for being separated his hands
just for living the way they force man
then I will be there to transform them into sand

Whenever you feel stranded or without a path
or sneaking around like a devilish stray cat
looking for someone to molest and finally eat
never fearing the chance of sour defeat
since you can't remember anything good and bright
because you always hidden your true values and light
and lived just like the creatures in the dark night
seeking the truth in the false and empty
then I will be there to free you from your empathy

Whenever you are in deep and in need
or getting so tired of the lightning speed
having problems controlling your great friend the horse
and have no traces left of remorse
filling yourself up with unhealthy seeds
and can't understand why you never stop to bleed
when all that you want is to have a life
without being continusly forced to use your knife
then I will be there to reset your mind
so you finally can understand that you are a human
but you have to call my name



OJO

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Written November 30th, 2005

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  • Midnight Fairy
    December 1, 2005
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    This is a truly sweet and heartfelt write. It's beauitiful and it shows that you care about someone so much to let them lean on you in their time of need. I love it, thanks for entering and good luck.