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poor winter grazing

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poor winter grazing
brings hunger to a cold land
deer tracked by wolf

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try to be positive!
Written November 29th, 2005

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  • myron silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    nice poem...

  • Celticpoet gold member
    November 30, 2005
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    Thank you Charlene...I really appreciate all the positive remarks you make about my poetry..and I hope you are feeling well in yourself?...be strong!....Thanks again!..Dan
  • oh quiet one
    November 30, 2005
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    Excellent write. keep up the wonderful work. you have a uniques to your poems that i like. Keep writting.

    take care

  • Celticpoet gold member
    November 30, 2005
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    Once again Richard..I must thank you for your most generous and encouraging remarks on my poetry!...I truly appreciate a poet and author of your stature giving me such encouragement!..it is praise inceed!...my grateful thanks..Dan.

  • Celticpoet gold member
    November 30, 2005
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    Thank you very much for your very generous comment!

  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    November 30, 2005
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    Deep and beautiful

    deep inspirational depth and beauty flow through out this poem and the imagination runs wildly with this Haiku of yours very beautiful job smiles Sincerely, Paul
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