Vibrations found, eyes found expanding
opening from nothing twisting seas unravel
all colour, all possibilities
slowly feeling spins liquid hand out
adorning endlessly, changing onwards
heart swelling, beating out
The perpetual mass balanced
a terrible beauty inspiring, my love companion
humming a sound perfect...
Freeing me
Author notes
The title says what i mean...in more ways then one...inspired by a visions that happens all the time...i cant forget
Written November 29th, 2005
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Hey when are you coming back
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Ah, I know this feeling well, this swirl, this abyss of leaving this plane and melding to another as though pulled there. Well penned and conveys that drifting/forced feeling of wonder. Impressive and solid imagery. Bravo! Blessings, Gypsy
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Amazing how you can write so brilliantly with so few words. I tend to lean towards the shorter ones sometimes as they tend to deliver a blow in the ending, just like the emotions do when they are animate..great job and good luck with this.
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Fantastic piece of writing~! Breathtaking in the simplicity and I hope you win an award for this! Great work and very thought provoking. Enjoyed it very much and am looking forward to reading more of you work. Hugs Sylvyr
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Your very welcome!
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i do thank you very much for reading this Charismatic...and for you thoughtful comments...love and light
dark search -
Oh my! Very interesting work here. I like the imagery in this poem. I could feel this as I read it and infact re-read it many times. Goodluck in the contest.
Best Wishes,
Charishma
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i am glad you have read my piece...and it seems you enjoyed it...thank you for your time...
dark search -
Very complex piece you have written here. I think it ended a little to short but beyond that you captured my attention just sad that it ended so quickly
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