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There is always going to be that one person you want but can never really have as close as the both of you seem there will always be that wall that obstacle that you can't break down.
As much as you want it to work it cannot be fixed yours and his feelings and emotions just can't be mixed. As much as it hurts you've got to let go even if that means your true feelings he will never know.


.LOVE.

Love comes and love goes but there will always be that one person you just can't let go of. His face will haunt you in your dreams your tears are what will get you to sleep at night. You'll want to turn back the clock so bad just to go back and re-live that last endless moment you and him shared. Let out every unsaid feeling or unsaid thought you thought was too stupid to say out loud. Just to go back to feel his arms around you one last time and look him in the eyes tell him to his face that he is the one your heart won't let anyone else replace.

Author notes

these are 2 poems also older ones of mine they are rather short but please tell me what u think.
Written November 29th, 2005

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  • prince1371
    December 3, 2005
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    From what I could read this looked like a good poem but the background made it real difficult to try to read. You may have to change it or use darker lettering. But from what I could read it was good.