You showed up, from thin air,
And I was so unknowing.
You tried to kiss me, lean closer,
And who knows where it’s going.
We connected on many levels,
But you ran away in fear.
And I sit alone in sorrow,
One single, unknowing, tear.
Author notes
ummm its about not being sure if you like a guy, and when you finally decide to go for him, he kinda decides he doesnt want you...
Written November 29th, 2005
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Another poem I can relate to perfectly. But I had a happy ending.
I know that someday you'll have a happy ending as well. 
Very beautiful poem that clearly portrays your feelings and emotions. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!
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I love this poem, very descriptive and i've had the same feeling before...i can relate to this poem. Well done! Keep up the good work...
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yeah, i think most of us have experienced that feeling and unfortuanetly, know it well.
this was kind of short, but if it had more length to it, it would have ruined it.
it is perfect how it is, the message is conveyed well and its set our well as well...geez, a lot of wells wasn't there?
anywhay...another great poem!
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