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Waiting

Sitting here alone wondering why,
Left not knowing waiting for a reply.
So I question my mind endlessly,
waiting for the time I will finally see.

How are you able to set it all aside?
Your feelings you always seem to hide.
Is it lonely to live lost in your head?
Since your heart is now cold, empty, and dead.

I so badly at first wanted acceptance from you,
and as time went on my desire grew.
But I learned that your heart was not open for me,
it was locked and I could not find the key.

The silence now is comforting,
for no longer do I question unanswered things.
It seems as though numbness has settled my mind,
my feelings I have now left far behind.


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Written November 29th, 2005

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  • tmullins
    December 17, 2005
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    great write. "Is it lonely lost within your head, since your heart is now cold empty and dead." that is a great question, wish I had asked a few people that in my lifetime!!~~tracy


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    December 16, 2005
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    Fantastic write, it captures the emotion brilliantly!! Well done!!

  • Wish4LThinking
    December 15, 2005
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    Another good one! And a feeling I know too well. Thanks for sharing!


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 29, 2005
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    Sad, really, with one coming to the realization that things will not change, and that life goes on the way it now is, forgetting about what used to be..


  • Watuwant silver member
    November 29, 2005
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    An emotion packed poem, depicting an old story familiar to many of us about unrequited love. We've all been there. thanks for sharing.
    peace
    doug

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