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Angels

I am no one's angel.
Not yours,
Nor hers,
Or hers.
Was I once one? You may ask
Ah, yes,
Though that was a long time ago;
A very long time ago.

I will not pretend to be your angel.
Never, will I be,
Because...
If you need an angel,
Then don't I need one too?

Flutter, flutter
Hear them fly away.
Fly away so free...

Author notes

Bleh. So I'm writing again.
Written November 29th, 2005

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  • Smokie smokes
    September 17, 2008
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    wow,this is great what else can I say...


  • Cdoggydawg33
    May 14, 2006
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    that was beautiful, i may not be able to critique poems... but i know what i enjoy.. great job

  • shadedheart
    November 29, 2005
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    Angels are always a great topic for poems. So powerful yet so beautiful. Great peom, i enjoyed reading it. The ending was fantastic too
    Flutter, flutter
    Hear them fly away.
    Fly away so free...
    Keep up this type of work...it will be remember