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Carrying Me

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"I'm Carrying" Paul McCartney
www.mplcommunications.com/mccartney/Discography_Search.asp?SongTitle=I%27m+Carrying&SortOrder=1&submit.x=10&submit.y=8


I hew to you my dove
Your wings of words sail free
Whenever I'm falling
You come to rescue me
 
Even when I soar high
On summer days like this
You edify me still
With your angelic kiss
 
A mist of love you give
With each teardrop you cry
As you wipe my sadness
My droplets fill your eyes
 
You erase my burdens
With love you just can't beat
And as you comfort me
Your heart molds mine complete
 
-poeticweaver  
-angeleyes711



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Written November 29th, 2005

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 14, 2005
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  • payed4byjah
    December 5, 2005
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    Highly Applause-ible lol

    aww this is so sweet and beautifully written! This shows the makings of true poets, ones who will be somewhere someday. I half expected just another empty, cliche poem as I was looking down the most applauded list, but this, this is worthy of applause!


  • AbeLLa5291
    December 4, 2005
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    Great write! love the background...adds a lot... and your poem was just excellent! I needed the hope tonight...again wonderful write


  • musiccityinc
    December 4, 2005
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    amazing, good feel to it... and strucure.


  • Summer Dawn
    December 4, 2005
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    very beautiful work


  • mostwantedreject
    December 4, 2005
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    ... dang

  • it all i know
    December 4, 2005
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    so you can't fathom not loving people?

    as a working class, person. i'm astounded that i can even finish one of your poems. the thing about reading your poem with all your presentation is that i can kind of tell from it that you love people and not just words, not just the website. kudo's on that.but as such, your poem did not end up very good.

  • anymouseinthehouse
    December 4, 2005
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    this is an awesome poem that says enough without saying too much. it's stress free and carefree. good stuff!


  • scythe
    December 4, 2005
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    fine

    A fine text, with alot of passion allocated


  • Wesley Storer
    December 3, 2005
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    Wow, you are such a great poet. I think I will just give up and realize my ineptitude.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 3, 2005
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    Glad ya liked it, thanks for your kind words...Peace!


  • December 3, 2005
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    Aww, that's very cute. So eloquent too! ^^ Very good work!

    loserzunite111


  • x-YouRockMyWorld--x
    December 3, 2005
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    amazing

    holy hell this work is amazing keep it up & u'll end up a great writer someday....

  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 3, 2005
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    Thanks, we're glad you enjoyed!


  • Mieta
    December 3, 2005
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    10 i love it!

    wow...very nice...really...that explains the true doubts yet pickmeups of a relationship...the background is the cherry to a wonderfully written piece


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 3, 2005
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    Thanks for all your uplifting comments, I'm glad so many enjoyed our loving piece. Much love to all!

    -Timothy & Sharon

  • B-x0
    December 3, 2005
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    This is amazing. I wish I could write this beautifully.x.o.x.

  • xHopelessXRomanticx
    December 3, 2005
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    Fantastic

    WOW! This poem is excellent!! It has a nice flow to it. If I were to give you stars for how well this piece was written, I'd totally give you 5! Can't wait to read more of your work.
    -Hopeless-

  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 3, 2005
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    Thanks Wingspan, we are glad you enjoyed, peace!


  • LeftAccount
    December 3, 2005
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    Beautiful

    I thought that it was beautiful but they were things that could be improved on. Mostly, your rhyming scheme and some of the lines didn't make much sense. Other then that it was a pleasure to read.


  • AnimalYeah101
    December 2, 2005
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    5*

    WOW! I loved it! It was so short, yet it touched me in a way I can't explain, after reading it I was just like WOW! thanx, I love it and I love Paul McCartney! You write great poems, and you have a great taste in music, you are just so ausome!
    KDB

  • BlUeExPlOrEr9731
    December 2, 2005
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    tres bien!(very good) i liked it alot! :-)


  • sustaind
    December 2, 2005
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    very touching

  • Wingspan
    December 2, 2005
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    Beautifully crafted from the inside out.


  • Facial Pagan
    December 2, 2005
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    excellent

    wow..thats hella crazy.emotion mixed with life.


  • Dspiritsong gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    Excellent

    This is beautiful my dear... ...where did you get the background for this lovely poem...it is beautiful as well. I really enjoyed how you wrote the poem... I enjoyed the feelings that I got from this poem. Excellent work...Dee


  • LostAndCantBFound
    December 2, 2005
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    hey this is a really good poem i like the flow of it


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    Thanks Blaze, you're always so uplifting, much blessings to you my friend, Timothy


  • Blazing White Wolf
    December 2, 2005
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    once again you guys have spun a poetic masterpiece of love well done guys!
    love and light
    blaze


  • Entwining Beauty
    December 2, 2005
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    this is really an amazing piece if poetry.it was wriiten so beautifuly.


  • spamwitch
    December 2, 2005
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    The entire poem was fabulous my friend, the way you wrote it so simplisticly and it rolled right through to absolute perfection. The background you chose really gave it the little extra spark, all around a beautiful piece of work.


  • magicalprincess
    December 2, 2005
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    Some people just don't know good poetry, this piece rocks, and I for one love it! No matter what arch rhymer says, what a jerk.

    Pen on you two~


  • Simone Brooklyn
    December 2, 2005
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    hmm....not a big fan of paul mccartney, but i do like the beatles and all.


  • poetryrocksmysox
    December 2, 2005
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    Perfect, Lovely Pen By The Both Of You!

    doesAxlhaveajack....You must be the only one who does not appreciate good poetry...and what a weird thing to say, I don't like it, in all caps too, wow, you're a real indept person I can see..no reason why, or anything, just mean spirited...cool, hope you enjoy being you..I have one think I'm happy about, thanks God I'm not you! OK, now for this lovely poem, not only do I like the way it flows, the rhyme in it is flawless I might add, but the content uplifting, and more then I can say for some I've read...Thanks for sharing your poetic style here, I've enjoyed reading both of your works for quite sometime. Much love to you both!

    Your friend, poetryrocksmysox

  • arch rhymer
    December 2, 2005
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    twee

    sorry too twee for me


  • Breaking The Girl
    December 2, 2005
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    Very good, I liked it a lot, especially the begining stanza... "I hew to you my dove
    Your wings of words sail free
    Whenever I'm falling
    You come to rescue me" Your poem is almost lyrical... Once again, very nice.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, we thank you for reading, much love, Timothy

  • Youallareposers
    December 2, 2005
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    beautiful

    that is really good.....


  • December 2, 2005
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    I DON'T LIKE IT!!


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    Dear one ICULookn,
    Thanks for reading us and your gifts of insight,
    We appreciate your love very much


  • ShaShay
    December 2, 2005
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    Beautifully done. Sentiment is wonderful. I am sure the love and caring comes through to the ones that need it. Pen on, fellow poet.
    ~~~POO~~~


  • ICULookn
    December 2, 2005
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    Exceptional Pen

    Expectional penning! Your title is what captured my eye within the featured box! I'm pleased I have decided to click! This is one of those poems that melts a readers heart! You captured the interest, your flow is smooth and well stated. The imagery is well displayed.
    Your background isperfect for such an exceptional pen piece. And of coures I love the G flowing...some of my favorities!
    GREAT collaboration AngelEyes711& poeticweaver!

  • Nanotta
    December 2, 2005
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    The first stanza was sooooooooo amazing:
    I hew to you my dove
    Your wings of words sail free
    Whenever I'm falling
    You come to rescue me

    The poem is so soft and cute.
    Keep it up.

    .: Nano :.


  • rosepoet
    December 2, 2005
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    Lovely, This is very refined and well done, wonderful
    nice tone and good flownice imagery and good expressions.thanks for the read and keeppenning


  • December 2, 2005
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    That was so beautiful. Five stars!

  • bubblesnift
    December 2, 2005
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    hi.....me new to the site....but comin across ur work sure was a treat.....really nice poem...simple n yet so effective
    cheers!!
    bubbles


  • Heart Sutra
    December 2, 2005
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    This is musical and sweet. It has a wonderfull uplifting feeling to it. Obviously this is a tribute to what wonderful writing you have accomplished. Bravo!

  • sugar dream poet
    December 2, 2005
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    super

    i love it. you had me amazed by your words. weldone and good job. team work seems excellent. i hope to find some1one that i have as much in common with and can get on the same wavelentgh so i might be able to work out a collaborative peice. again good job.


  • richiesnana
    December 2, 2005
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    I LOVE IT SO MUCH

    Truly an awesome write, I very much enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing this poem, it grabbed my heart.

    Kisses: Sue


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 2, 2005
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    Sorry, commented on this before. Could never forget this beautiful page. Just forgot the title.


  • Carlos
    December 1, 2005
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    Wow. This is an amazing piece. Well done

  • nosajekcol1
    December 1, 2005
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    awesomee

    Wow that was very impressive. The length was perfect for the content and i donno it was real good. Nice use of words i barely ever think of, like angelic that was awesome and i forgot that word even existed. Thanks for reminding me to. Very good indeed.


  • PurpleSky
    December 1, 2005
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    Absolutly Beautiful!

    the two of you write the most moving and beautiful poetry. You are always a joy and pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing this moving and endearing piece of poetry with me my friends! you two are awsome!!
    huggles
    ~Lena~

  • ShellG
    December 1, 2005
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    Oh that is so beautiful, Im in awe..Breathtaking,I loved it the emotions shared here are wonderful,A beautiful background to match.I loved it.So heartfelt and touching.Excellent job


  • PoetrySmiles
    December 1, 2005
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    "As you wipe my sadness
    My droplets fill your eyes"

    Beautifully put. I adore the pure, serene simplicity of it. Extremely well done, both of you. Thank you for writing it!
    XOXO Cheerios XOXO
    Meg


  • Dark Prince
    December 1, 2005
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    This is a great collaborative piece. I have never under taken such a task, It seems that a lot could wrong. This proves me wrong.
    This is clearly two minds in synch. Again well done!!

  • WhiSpring Rozes
    December 1, 2005
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    A very sweet poem

  • lonley girl
    December 1, 2005
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    good

    I liked this poem it was good . keep up the good work.

  • nanaki
    December 1, 2005
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    Great job

    This...is...awesome! it flows nicely, and it rhymes. keep up the great works!

  • EngravedPoem6887
    December 1, 2005
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    Very nice. Really great work!

  • PhantasyStar
    December 1, 2005
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    Im speechless. This is so beautiful.

  • crystallove
    December 1, 2005
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    this wow amazing poem. still like this one and it is so beautifully written.
    This so cute.with a nice tone and good flow.
    I also like the picture.Thanks for the wonderful poem.


  • tootsvegan
    December 1, 2005
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    That's cool, I like the combined authorship. This was a well written love poem, I'm glad I got to read it. I am a sucker for rhyme and meter, and this was perfect in both. Excellent work.


  • robert bolin
    December 1, 2005
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    This is another beautifully brilliantly penned poem and the back
    Ground is astonishing your hearts beat to a heavenly rythem as you paint such a magnificent and powerfully angelic work of art
    To life thank you again for allowing me to read and comment on your work..


  • Lyndon gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    Impressed!

    I have added my comment but I forgot to applause. Lyndon Wise.


  • Lyndon gold member
    December 1, 2005
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    Hello, both.
    'Your heart molds mine complete' is an ending which encapsulates the little love pledge lyric, written with
    controlled passion. Thank you. Lyndon Wise.


  • DancingRed
    December 1, 2005
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    This is a really good poem. It flowed beautifully and used great imagery.
    HannaH.


  • Tattboy silver member
    December 1, 2005
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    A beautiful poem. Simple, whistful, lovely.


  • December 1, 2005
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    wow beautiful nice tone and good flow. nice expression.
    this poem was absolutely brilliant.
    Awesome visuals, you painted a sensational picture in my mind.

  • Hot Rod Bob
    November 30, 2005
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    Lovely

    great work! as always. Again you seem to speak to so many including me. Thank you for your writings. Always a pleasure.


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    November 30, 2005
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    Really great piece. I like the poetic style and flow to this. So fluid and pretty. Great write. - cgirl0410

  • kisses-cole
    November 30, 2005
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    good

    good poem i liked it it even kinda made my friend feel like it was about him... that means you wre doing a good job of reaching your audience! nice work keep it up luv ya


  • Cameron
    November 30, 2005
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    this poem was very cute, I liked it alot.
    Like classical with all the good stuff in it .

    Enjoyed it lots.

    Cameron


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 30, 2005
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    What a wonderful background you have created here to go along with the rhytmic rhyming verses. Collaboration works!

  • Mister Bangladesh
    November 30, 2005
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    Really good

    i really liked it, the two lines which stood out to me were:
    And as you comfort me
    Your heart molds mine complete

  • Lb
    November 30, 2005
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    lovely

    This poem made me smile. Thank you and keep writing.


  • Mystical-Gardenia
    November 30, 2005
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    Magnficently crafted!! Truly, inspirational!

    Magnificent flow and imagery ... Excellent beautifully crafted "A mist of love you give
    With each teardrop you cry
    As you wipe my sadness
    My droplets fill your eyes" Awesome imagery!! Kudos to you both!! Wishing you both much success in all of your endeavors and a joyous Holiday Season!! Alas, I am out of applause and this beautiful inspirational piece is so deserving!!


  • scmatt
    November 30, 2005
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    I thought it was great, nice job

  • Lokari
    November 30, 2005
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    this was beautiful. I loved it. keep it up


  • poeticpieces
    November 29, 2005
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    Lovely!

    Love the background, love the writers, heehee!
    Enjoy your love songs,
    and I appreciate you sharing you two! Much

    lil Tim


  • Tony El Great silver member
    November 29, 2005
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    I really liked the flow to this work, and what a nice work it was; impressed by all you put into the setup for this poem as well. I think you may enjoy my poem "The Rose."
    Sincerely, Tony ¦:¬{


  • 9 hex 9
    November 29, 2005
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    i really love the way that this flowed, i thought it had excellent flow. also, i personally find that its easier for me to write a better poem about love when it is in a more negative light, i have really tried it in a positive way but for some reason its harder for me. i wish that i could write one like the one you just wrote here, wonderful.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    November 29, 2005
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    very well written

    You have written a very beautiful poem here. It makes me still believe that love may someday find me again.
    Erasing burdens with love is a wonderful sentiment.


  • Holy Spirit Filled
    November 29, 2005
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    Aw, this is a pretty poem. I got some nice visuals reading it. Thanks for sharing. Good job and keep penning!


  • B Chandler
    November 29, 2005
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    hmmm sounds like an item thing; words were full of good emotions
    keep'em up
    Rae


  • So Called Chaos
    November 29, 2005
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    good love poem, a lot of poem comes out of it when you read it. i like the background too

  • usherzsum3rbaby
    November 29, 2005
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    Good

    Wow! This is really good.


  • Tarja
    November 29, 2005
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    this is beautiful and so full of hope and faith. i really enjoy a different out look on things besides just darkness and death. (hard to believe, i'm sure.) but yes, i think this is quite lovely


  • Requiem of the Wolf
    November 29, 2005
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    AWESOME!

    An awe inspiring poem! Straight from the heart! Excellent poetry! Keep on writing!


  • DD Sai
    November 29, 2005
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    sorry forgot to applaude


  • DD Sai
    November 29, 2005
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    Dude this is a great love poem. You got some mad skillz. The first stanza cought my eye really.


  • Blood-Lust88
    November 29, 2005
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    tremendous

    its very beautiful, i wish i was as talented as you

  • RoSiE-ChEeKs
    November 29, 2005
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    wow this song is really sweet and beautiful nd very emotional i love it

  • Still- Lost
    November 29, 2005
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    nice!

  • midnight wolf
    November 29, 2005
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    <3

  • midnight wolf
    November 29, 2005
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    This is beautiful! keep up the great writes

  • Cobalt Blue
    November 29, 2005
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    Great poem written deep from the heart. You did well at putting forth your emotion into the words of this creation. Very nicely done!


  • Beautiful Dreamer
    November 29, 2005
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    Beautiful and Heartfelt

    Very beautiful and heartfelt! I love the writings you two do, they have all been so beautiful! You have much talent, keep sharing.
    Kelli


  • Silent Rapture
    November 29, 2005
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    finally a good rhtming one on here.
    im not a big fan of them
    but you showed me that they can be good
    scratch that, great.

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