I cherished my dreams, though beyond my reach
They filled me with such, sweet pleasures
The colours so rich, like the morning sky
These were my only true treasures
I felt so loved, so safe and free
I never wanted to wake
For life itself, in reality
Has been nothing more, than just fake
These heartaches endured, most everyday
Is not, what I would choose
My heart so lonely, my love for life
It torments, which makes me confused
But in my dreams, we are as one
Standing, side by side
All loneliness just, disappears
Even before my closed eyes
For I am one, who's lost my dreams
Of passion, sweet love and care
Now nightmares have come and stolen away
All that I held most dear
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Written November 29th, 2005
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Hi Jessykah, Thank you for your lovely comments on my poem. I am glad that you enjoyed it!! Thank you again, Have a happy holiday!! And thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!! Jasmine
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I liked this poem a lot. I could feel the emotion that you put into this, it seeped out of the poem. You're form was good, and the wording was even better. The picture also added to it. It went perfectly with the poem.
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Hello Ken... IBT.. I am so glad that you were moved by my words and thankyou for complimenting me on my writing and how I was able to release my emotions into my work. It is something that I strive for when writting anything. To touch the one that is reading. I know in time, life can only get better!! Especially when you're in love!!
Thank you for applauding my poem!!! Jasmine
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Wow, such a sad poem, with so much hurt.......not sure what to say. I can only hope it is not you that truly feels that way. Your poem is written with so much emotion it is unreal...it is as if I were there experiencing all that you have written. An excellent form of showing true emotions through your poetry..thank you for sharing, have a beautiful, hope things get better for you as life always does. Ken, IBT
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