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I Pray






 

Oh My Dear Goddess,
Show me some guidance
Lift me in your arms
Give me reassurance


 

Chaotic emotions
Within a haze
I walk in limbo
Through life's maze


 

Let me know
All is for not
I can't help feeling
Tied in knots


 

A lost soul, I am
Feeling out of place
Falling through
Time and space


 

Right or left
Which way to turn
My path is
My only concern


 

Oh Divine One,
Hear my call
Lead me again to
Stand proud and tall


 

Caught between
Dreams and reality
My only wish is
To be set free


 

I need your help
Show me the way
Lead up and out
Far from this dismay


 

Grant me serenity
To find inner peace
Letting all my
Inner turmoil cease


 

Oh Great One,
To you I pray
Reach down
Show me the way


Author notes

This will be my last post for awhile. How long I don't know. I will be around but not often at all. I will also continue to reading and commenting but posting I will not.

Many Blessings to you all....


celticmoon
Written November 29th, 2005

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  • petty foibles
    January 2, 2006
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    Let me know
    All is for not
    I can't help feeling
    Tied in knots

    the above stanza ripped into me as this is my soul you wrote on paper my prayers to the Goddess are offten i am too small mother lift me up and show me my path. i think for this verse alone you should win the gold. i think she did make the absolute right decision. there was no coin flip in my book you win by a mile. i have delebritly not read most of the poems in my contest as i dont want to get confused and am going to give each a thourough reading through before judging it. it is now closed but i hope i will find another jem like this in my pagan poems contest from you thank you so much for the courage of this write as i know it is your soul on paper too. brightest blessings be up on you sister of the circle! be happy and prosperous in the new year, and may your flower gardens of creativity bloom bright!

    your friend and fellow writer M.C.


  • Celticmoon
    December 29, 2005
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    I'm pleased you liked this piece.

    Thank you for your kind words and your prayers.
    They are most appreciated adn welcomed


  • Obsidian Blade
    December 29, 2005
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    Beauty. That is what this piece of your soul holds. The beauty of raw emotions, prayer, the Goddess, the God, everything in this prayer; in this poem.

    My prayers are with you if you choose to embrace them

    Blessings,

    ~ Dian


  • Celticmoon
    December 28, 2005
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    Thank you much for your very kind words.
    I am pleased you liked this piece


  • Ivy Claw
    December 28, 2005
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    WOW... i really like this poem. It reflect some of my current emotion toward my faith. It like im floundering in all I believe. However, By sending me a stundent, the Goddes reasured me that what I believe it right. She too will grant your prayers request, and help you through these puzzling times. Also...before I forget, I think that inserting the picture of the crouching naked girl helped to define the emotion of being lost from your words. She is like the spokesperson in a way. Sitting in a low esteem postion, having all fears naked to find the tuth, or even just encouragement. Great write, and keep it up!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 2, 2005
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    beautiful~

    A beautifully penned poem sweetie......
    A beautifully penned prayer as well
    May you only have love light and laughter comming your way
    I want to thank you for sharing with us your poems with us here on A.P.as well......
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Celticmoon
    December 1, 2005
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    Awww......Rob you always say the sweetest things.
    Thank you hun

    Edited on Dec 01, 9:45 because ''.


  • robert bolin
    December 1, 2005
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    This is one of the most beautifully penned poems I have ever read it captivates ones soul with the feeling of emotional freedom that has been released from the heart to unlock the misterys of life and love, thank you for always sharring your beautiful talent with all of us here on AP..and may the light of poetry always shine upon your amazing heart rob..

  • passionsdaughter
    November 30, 2005
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    Heartfelt

    Sweetie, Your prayer was heard even before you penned this precious; for your spirit is an all knowing messenger that makes your voice heard. This is Beautiful. Sending only positive energy your way. Your words will be missed...hurry back soon!


    Nicole


  • maryannde gold member
    November 30, 2005
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    Sweetie..my heart aches for you and this confusion.
    This is one of the most sincere and beautiful prayers I have seen here and I know that it will be answered.

    You have touched so many lives on this site. I pray you may find some peace and hope within their caring for you. Is this "real" life? Perhaps not. Still...I've know some on this site who were saved by the concern and caring of this array of poetic strangers.
    Please know that many here do care...and they will be sending their own prayers to help you find your way.

    hon...
    Mary Ann


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    November 30, 2005
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    I hope the space your creating works for you I have a mental mountain I go and sit on (dont laugh your welcome to site and think too) and I really hope that by reading and commenting your soul takes flight and you once more begin to write...
    Paul


  • smoking gun
    November 29, 2005
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    this is beautiful dear,very nice,your a beautiful woman inside and out,I know you have been told this before,just thought I would take the time to tell you,life is to short as it is,people should let others know how they feel,because in the end love is all that will last--kirby


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    November 29, 2005
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    Beautiful and loving, so full of hunger for the knowledge to be unlocked from within. It is, I think, the best poem you have written yet hon... hang in there and know that you are not alone in these feelings and thoughts.

    Hugs and love,

    Sylvyr

  • o20kimberlyn06o
    November 29, 2005
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    excellent

    Wow, this is soooooooo goood! I love the inspiration behind it, I love the subject, it has helped to guide me even further. I love finding poems like this, and this is the first time on this sight that I have truly found one with such elegance!
    Keep writing!


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    November 29, 2005
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    Prayers are often granted
    blessing therefore are planted
    however we turn away
    from where we stay.

    So down the path
    we feel empty laughs
    why does sadness follow
    and feelings so hollow.

    Best to stay straight
    and for blessings wait
    yes the forest's dark
    until opening into parks.

    Oh sweet lady you
    wonderful poetess and true
    let not friends rue
    fear what you'll do.

    God is always God
    guiding path in woods
    we turn from Him
    innocently in our sin.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 29, 2005
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    best wishes and hope to see you back.. be well Happy Holidays to you..Linda


  • wbiro gold member
    November 29, 2005
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    Well, Bel, catch up on what you need to, and let your heart rest... for it is a treasure...

  • sad1976
    November 29, 2005
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    beautiful

    this is a wonderful poem.

  • raindroplets
    November 29, 2005
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    This is a lovley and deep hearted poem. I loved it alot, i hope you keep writting more, you are a wonderful poet<3


  • CountryCousin
    November 29, 2005
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    A very good piece.

    I must agree with bluegreenwaters this is indeed a very sincere prayer. I do hope to read more of your work as you get to it. I also trust that right now you know what you want. A great piece indeed.


  • Sunkissedrose
    November 29, 2005
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    Beautiful

    This was one of the most sincere prayers I have read/heard in a very long time. I wish I could help you in this time of turmoil...just know I am around if you need me, just leave me a note or something...This was a wonderfully written prayer, I hope to see more of these in the coming days.

    ~Carrie

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