I Pray by Celticmoon at All poetry

Oh My Dear Goddess,
Show me some guidance
Lift me in your arms
Give me reassurance

Chaotic emotions
Within a haze
I walk in limbo
Through life's maze

Let me know
All is for not
I can't help feeling
Tied in knots

A lost soul, I am
Feeling out of place
Falling through
Time and space

Right or left
Which way to turn
My path is
My only concern

Oh Divine One,
Hear my call
Lead me again to
Stand proud and tall

Caught between
Dreams and reality
My only wish is
To be set free

I need your help
Show me the way
Lead up and out
Far from this dismay

Grant me serenity
To find inner peace
Letting all my
Inner turmoil cease

Oh Great One,
To you I pray
Reach down
Show me the way

Author notes

This will be my last post for awhile. How long I don't know. I will be around but not often at all. I will also continue to reading and commenting but posting I will not.

Many Blessings to you all....

celticmoon
Written November 29th, 2005

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petty foibles
January 2, 2006
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Let me know
All is for not
I can't help feeling
Tied in knots

the above stanza ripped into me as this is my soul you wrote on paper my prayers to the Goddess are offten i am too small mother lift me up and show me my path. i think for this verse alone you should win the gold. i think she did make the absolute right decision. there was no coin flip in my book you win by a mile. i have delebritly not read most of the poems in my contest as i dont want to get confused and am going to give each a thourough reading through before judging it. it is now closed but i hope i will find another jem like this in my pagan poems contest from you thank you so much for the courage of this write as i know it is your soul on paper too. brightest blessings be up on you sister of the circle! be happy and prosperous in the new year, and may your flower gardens of creativity bloom bright!

your friend and fellow writer M.C.
Celticmoon
December 29, 2005
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I'm pleased you liked this piece.

Thank you for your kind words and your prayers.
They are most appreciated adn welcomed
Obsidian Blade
December 29, 2005
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Beauty. That is what this piece of your soul holds. The beauty of raw emotions, prayer, the Goddess, the God, everything in this prayer; in this poem.

My prayers are with you if you choose to embrace them

Blessings,

~ Dian
Celticmoon
December 28, 2005
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Thank you much for your very kind words.
I am pleased you liked this piece
Ivy Claw
December 28, 2005
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WOW... i really like this poem. It reflect some of my current emotion toward my faith. It like im floundering in all I believe. However, By sending me a stundent, the Goddes reasured me that what I believe it right. She too will grant your prayers request, and help you through these puzzling times. Also...before I forget, I think that inserting the picture of the crouching naked girl helped to define the emotion of being lost from your words. She is like the spokesperson in a way. Sitting in a low esteem postion, having all fears naked to find the tuth, or even just encouragement. Great write, and keep it up!
Blushfulmoon
December 2, 2005
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beautiful~
A beautifully penned poem sweetie......
A beautifully penned prayer as well
May you only have love light and laughter comming your way
I want to thank you for sharing with us your poems with us here on A.P.as well......
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
Celticmoon
December 1, 2005
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Awww......Rob you always say the sweetest things.
Thank you hun

Edited on Dec 01, 9:45 because ''.
robert bolin
December 1, 2005
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This is one of the most beautifully penned poems I have ever read it captivates ones soul with the feeling of emotional freedom that has been released from the heart to unlock the misterys of life and love, thank you for always sharring your beautiful talent with all of us here on AP..and may the light of poetry always shine upon your amazing heart rob..
passionsdaughter
November 30, 2005
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Heartfelt
Sweetie, Your prayer was heard even before you penned this precious; for your spirit is an all knowing messenger that makes your voice heard. This is Beautiful. Sending only positive energy your way. Your words will be missed...hurry back soon!

Nicole
maryannde
November 30, 2005
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Sweetie..my heart aches for you and this confusion.
This is one of the most sincere and beautiful prayers I have seen here and I know that it will be answered.

You have touched so many lives on this site. I pray you may find some peace and hope within their caring for you. Is this "real" life? Perhaps not. Still...I've know some on this site who were saved by the concern and caring of this array of poetic strangers.
Please know that many here do care...and they will be sending their own prayers to help you find your way.

hon...
Mary Ann
Cyber Artist
November 30, 2005
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I hope the space your creating works for you I have a mental mountain I go and sit on (dont laugh your welcome to site and think too) and I really hope that by reading and commenting your soul takes flight and you once more begin to write...
Paul
smoking gun
November 29, 2005
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this is beautiful dear,very nice,your a beautiful woman inside and out,I know you have been told this before,just thought I would take the time to tell you,life is to short as it is,people should let others know how they feel,because in the end love is all that will last--kirby
Sylvyrwyng
November 29, 2005
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Beautiful and loving, so full of hunger for the knowledge to be unlocked from within. It is, I think, the best poem you have written yet hon... hang in there and know that you are not alone in these feelings and thoughts.

Hugs and love,

Sylvyr
o20kimberlyn06o
November 29, 2005
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excellent
Wow, this is soooooooo goood! I love the inspiration behind it, I love the subject, it has helped to guide me even further. I love finding poems like this, and this is the first time on this sight that I have truly found one with such elegance!
Keep writing!
Abdul T Alishtari
November 29, 2005
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Prayers are often granted
blessing therefore are planted
however we turn away
from where we stay.

So down the path
we feel empty laughs
why does sadness follow
and feelings so hollow.

Best to stay straight
and for blessings wait
yes the forest's dark
until opening into parks.

Oh sweet lady you
wonderful poetess and true
let not friends rue
fear what you'll do.

God is always God
guiding path in woods
we turn from Him
innocently in our sin.
MoonWillShadow
November 29, 2005
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best wishes and hope to see you back.. be well Happy Holidays to you..Linda
wbiro
November 29, 2005
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Well, Bel, catch up on what you need to, and let your heart rest... for it is a treasure...
sad1976
November 29, 2005
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beautiful
this is a wonderful poem.
raindroplets
November 29, 2005
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This is a lovley and deep hearted poem. I loved it alot, i hope you keep writting more, you are a wonderful poet<3
CountryCousin
November 29, 2005
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A very good piece.
I must agree with bluegreenwaters this is indeed a very sincere prayer. I do hope to read more of your work as you get to it. I also trust that right now you know what you want. A great piece indeed.
Sunkissedrose
November 29, 2005
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Beautiful
This was one of the most sincere prayers I have read/heard in a very long time. I wish I could help you in this time of turmoil...just know I am around if you need me, just leave me a note or something...This was a wonderfully written prayer, I hope to see more of these in the coming days.

~Carrie