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Moonlight Glare

Staring at the moonlight glare
Running my fingers through her hair
As we lay upoun the beach
Our Hearts are longing to reach
Never knew this moment would come
Life seems to be getting fun
Never knew i would be in love
The moon shines on her as it would a precious dove
the sun is starting to come up
O how i wish this moment wasn't up!

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Written November 29th, 2005

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    Very romantic poem. You describe a perfect moment when love makes us smile
    Moments as that one should last forever.

    Wishing you the best always,
    Mari


  • Fillthee Nae
    November 29, 2005
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    sweet! this is literally sweet! it's a beautiful poem! keep it up Joe! cute name!
    peace!
    ~naomi