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Hopeless Romantic

A hopeless romantic at the end of the rope,
A wishful thinker long lost in thought.
Candy coated dreams and wishes so true,
Arms ready to reach out and hold the one I adore.
And you... you are there, willing to accept,
Your own dreams and wishes melting me...
Your arms outstretched to me.
A hopeless romantic, a dreamer undying,
Long lost in day dreams
Never to return, not without you.

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Written November 29th, 2005

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 6, 2005
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    This is a very sweet poem . . . the descriptions you have written are beautiful. Short and saccharin sweet . . . just how I like them!
    Stay smiling and keep writing

    Pol


  • JasperWard
    November 29, 2005
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    a very nice peice with a great flow and visual

  • behind the skin
    November 29, 2005
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    Great

    Great job you really pulled me right into it. Keep on writing this was a great piece.


  • xobrokenxo
    November 29, 2005
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    wow I liked your poem it gives you a vivid picture in your mind about everything your saying I could feel the emotion from it great job