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Temptress

Sultry shall sedate you
With my wicked pen I write

With words I will inflate you
As my eyes gleam fire bright

An evil bargain I have made
In Satan's gloomy lair

And now i seek to snatch you
In my shrewd and cunning snare

So stay away from me, I say
And don't be caught, my friend

For the hour's getting late
And to be caught would be your end

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Written November 28th, 2005

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  • Chaoticfrolic
    November 29, 2005
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    ...CATCH ME CATCH ME I'M YOURS!!!! ^^ another wonderful piece from the talented young lady. can't wait to see both you and more of your wonderful work ^^
    Edited on Nov 29, 11:49 p.m. because ''.