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so the world is upside down,
there's a lock on the door tonight
[dont even think about walking in]
this is the last time,

my veins are bleeding sunlight -
i can see the stars from here.
lace my fingers through the darkness,
The glittering of the asphalt reminds me of your eyes.

those who dream, reach their scars.
i am the last toxin in a twisted game called 'love'
the five star tragedy in this theater of our lives.

these are my moments, and this is my day.
you'll never be truly alive until you've had everything torn away.

heartbreaker. dream taker.
the world is upside down.
and this is my magnificent high.
one more lover given over to the night sky.

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Written November 28th, 2005

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