Glory
Can only take you so far
Before it beats you with cold hands
However silently you scream
No, that instinct is too much
Glistens in the wind
As it twists and twirls on its blue silken thread
Refined
Though you're inclined to call it snobbish
The snub-nose high in the air
Pinky off the teacup
I never would have known
If you hadn't brought the leaves of peace
Fluttering and tossing
Fallen in the autumn frost
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Written November 28th, 2005
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i really loved this, it was original. different, i liked the feel. your rythm wasnt off and thats deffinetly a plus..good word usage
-Sasha -
Sounds to me like you're angry at a friend for acting better than you are. You have a very interesting way of putting it "Pinky off the teacup" I really like that line.
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