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It takes my breath away.

So this... is love?
The terrifying depths of a forever existed?
A sweet serenity of separation
forged fast by a single ethereal sensation.

This, is love?

Heights so vastly unexplained,
reached by such inadequate wings...
and who could have imagined all these things?


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Written November 28th, 2005

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  • SoNLuv89
    January 20, 2006
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    Wonderful

    A very wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work. I wish you luck with your writings!