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Messed Up

My confindence blown to bits.
My self esteem is crushed.
My insecruity just blown up in flames.
My secruity just faded away.
My sadness doesn't know what to do.
My anger is all confused.
My happy-ness doesn't know if it should stay or go.
All that's left of my emotional messed up body is my brusing ego.
And my aching heart that's still beating.

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Written November 28th, 2005

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  • SoxxDisastrous
    January 19, 2008
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    I can really relate to the feelings portrayed. Great job on this poem.


  • Andy Stephenson
    February 2, 2006
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    What messed you up. The protagonist in the poem is definitely confused, but so am I. I am wondering what has happened to cause the feelings expressed in the poem.


  • sustaind
    December 4, 2005
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    very well put