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Green

You secretly seethe with jealousy
Jade and emerald entice
Banknotes are forked out readily
A common but powerful vice

Chloroplasts are catching light
Turning it to life
Grassy pasture taking breath
Forests imposing might

The island is a patchwork quilt
Society’s seams are showing
Lime is poured in wounds again
The struggle keeps on going

Author notes

I plan to have a little booklet, lots of poems on lots of colours, and Lost and Ignorance in Bed, for my father's 50th birthday on Sunday. Help appreciated.
Written November 28th, 2005

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  • EvolvedLove
    June 27, 2006
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    I like this one, it was a bit more on the elegant side than your other work, really enjoyable.

  • Sammers
    November 30, 2005
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    Hey nice job! Not one of your better ones but still really good. I'm just glad you finally posted again. Im so happy when you post. Yay. great job!
    Sam