Why does it have to hurt
The pain I feel the blood I squirt
The noise I make
The last breath I take
Why did I make this mistake
How I wish this moment was fake
The bullet is periced within my skin
Now I know I can no longer win
Now I come to my sudden death
For I am taking my last breath.
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Written November 28th, 2005
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Wow... Love it, holy shit, that was pretty deep, and pretty fucking darn good, sorry for the language but that was AWESOME!
Love the rhyming, and love the words, Wish i could write like that, I am not near as good as you but I guess you could say I have some talent, not tryng to sell you off right now but I just posted 2 new poems, you should check them out "Broken Family" and "Another Addiction" and there is also one i posted a couple weeks ago "Cocaine Tears". Thankyou and Your Welcome
Hope to talk soon
And once again.. AWESOME!!!
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sweet! kicka$$ and gorey! i luv it! keep it up!
~naomi
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