it is raining and i can't go out!water's pouring from a giant spout.i dream of a maiden with flowers in her hair.dancing and singing oh i wish i were near!her voice is calling,melodies through the rain;water splashing here that refrain?of love and sorrow,and oh...Cupid's arrow,but its raining...heavily and i can't go out!!
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i wrote this piece when caught in the middle of a tropical storm.i was at the bank,signals on my phone were nil....so i thought of my ex girlfriend.enjoy it.
Written November 28th, 2005
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Oh my! What an adorable poem, this was so good and totally cute. Seems like something that would be said in some magical land with fairies and....ok... I'll be quiet...
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This was something diffrent but I like diffrent if all poetry was the same it would pretty dam boreing right. I usaly have dreams of maidens but mine wear the playboy ears. Great write my friend.
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I love the whimsical essence to this!Enjoyed very much.
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