The look in your eyes
When I said I was leaving...
Those crystal blue eyes
In that pretty young face.
You looked as if I
Had crushed your heart
And I wanted nothing more
Than to hold you tight.
Your firm, young body
And that "wise-beyond" smile
Leave a trail of lust
In this old lady's mind.
But you are forbidden
By decency and law
To be anything other
Than a kid with a crush.
The look in your eyes
When I said I was leaving...
Those crystal blue eyes
Filled with despair.
What a beautiful young thing you are.
Author notes
Written November 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love Written In A Lipstick Stain by ThisIsMyWonderland.
300 points, ended December 22, 2005, 20 entries
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Comments
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Oooooo. NICE! A kid crushing on an older woman. Don't see a lot of these works. I love it! XD Such a creative idea, and nicely written. Please, continue writing, and good luck in the contest! ^^
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Wow beautiful work! Thanks for entering
To be anything other
Than a kid with a crush.
Thats my fav. line...wonderful job and good luck!!
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